Construction Grade: 33/40 + 7/10 + 6/10 = 46/60

Newspaper:
The newspaper has developed into a much more believable product. It follwos concentions but challenges at the same time to appeal to a younger audience. At the same time it still looks like quite a serious paper rather than being simply 'entertaining' - maybe that's a good thing but would it take off? There's still a little bit too much white space I think that would be fully utilised in a real paper for advertising. Overall I think it's worthy of a bottom level 4. 33/40

Website:
BETTER! Still would like the area to right developed- small pics maybe?
7/10

Poster: Like the use of GCSE work for this - looks good and appeals to the audience. Bit more work on colour and shadows etc would have raised grade.
6/10

Planning Grade: 18/20

www:
Excellent planning - research into similar products, drafting, organising, time management, organisation and presentation of work

ebi:
Can't see any sketches/planning for the poster - or explanation of the image (is it your own, borrowed, manipulated?)

Hi Jack

Hard work eh? I'm just checking through blogs tonight to check what's in. Maybe you can work on the idea for your poster this weekend and gather images ready to go on Monday? Just print screen your website for now for the blog and also publish it and save to student home.