The newspaper has developed into a much more believable product. It follwos concentions but challenges at the same time to appeal to a younger audience. At the same time it still looks like quite a serious paper rather than being simply 'entertaining' - maybe that's a good thing but would it take off? There's still a little bit too much white space I think that would be fully utilised in a real paper for advertising. Overall I think it's worthy of a bottom level 4. 33/40
BETTER! Still would like the area to right developed- small pics maybe?
Poster: Like the use of GCSE work for this - looks good and appeals to the audience. Bit more work on colour and shadows etc would have raised grade.