Final Coursework grade: 82/100

Evaluation Feedback: 18/20

Excellent understanding in all areas. To develop I would suggest the use of theory for question 4 by linking it to the study we've done on web 2.0

Construction Grade: 33/40 + 7/10 + 6/10 = 46/60

Newspaper:
The newspaper has developed into a much more believable product. It follwos concentions but challenges at the same time to appeal to a younger audience. At the same time it still looks like quite a serious paper rather than being simply 'entertaining' - maybe that's a good thing but would it take off? There's still a little bit too much white space I think that would be fully utilised in a real paper for advertising. Overall I think it's worthy of a bottom level 4. 33/40

Website:
BETTER! Still would like the area to right developed- small pics maybe?
7/10

Poster: Like the use of GCSE work for this - looks good and appeals to the audience. Bit more work on colour and shadows etc would have raised grade.
6/10

Planning Grade: 18/20

www:
Excellent planning - research into similar products, drafting, organising, time management, organisation and presentation of work

ebi:
Can't see any sketches/planning for the poster - or explanation of the image (is it your own, borrowed, manipulated?)